one more plea

Now that more folks might be awake ... :) Is there anyone British out there who might be willing to give my Torchwood story a quick look, to check for any major phrasing issues? Much love to azarsuerte for giving me a ton of help already! :) But, as I'm fairly nervous about diving into this fandom, another pair of eyes would definitely be appreciated.

torchwood fic: dance without sleeping

It's possible I'll regret posting this while the new episode is actually airing. :) But, I can't sit on it any more! Lots and lots of love to azarsuerte and urbanbluesky for looking this over and pointing out some of my more obvious American word choices. Any errors that might remain are mine and mine alone!

Title: Dance Without Sleeping
Pairing: Jack/Gwen
Rating: R
Spoilers: None specific, maybe "They Keep Killing ..." if you squint.
Summary: Ten years after joining Torchwood, Gwen still lives with its particular demons. So does Jack. Sometimes, the demons are all they have to keep them company.

( After ten years, Gwen still wasn’t sure when Jack was kidding )