This was SO long and I LOVED EVERY FREAKIN' SECOND OF IT. o__o I love how you used non-linear narration. I loved how you were able to write such a long timeline after the inception job without making anyone go out of character. I love how realistic everything was.
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Date: 2010-08-17 05:11 am (UTC)This was SO long and I LOVED EVERY FREAKIN' SECOND OF IT. o__o I love how you used non-linear narration. I loved how you were able to write such a long timeline after the inception job without making anyone go out of character. I love how realistic everything was.
I LOVE ITTTT
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Sorry. I'll be more coherent next time.