Even when this fic was dark, it was still so beautiful. The way you described each of their colours and how they moved was brilliantly intense, and the boys' attitudes to what was going to happen...just incredible. I also loved the way the old tasks in Jon's grandmothers story were reworked to make them relevant to Jon's current situation. It felt so natural, because the tasks were just Jon being Jon and doing what he thought was right.
Normally I'm not one to read this kind of story, so when someone linked me to this today and said "READ THIS. SPENCER IS A FAERIE." I wasn't sure whether I wanted to read it or not. But from the first paragraph I was drawn in and I'm so glad I read it. It's perfect. If you were the queen, I would totally willingly be your pet :P
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Date: 2008-06-13 06:18 am (UTC)Even when this fic was dark, it was still so beautiful. The way you described each of their colours and how they moved was brilliantly intense, and the boys' attitudes to what was going to happen...just incredible. I also loved the way the old tasks in Jon's grandmothers story were reworked to make them relevant to Jon's current situation. It felt so natural, because the tasks were just Jon being Jon and doing what he thought was right.
Normally I'm not one to read this kind of story, so when someone linked me to this today and said "READ THIS. SPENCER IS A FAERIE." I wasn't sure whether I wanted to read it or not. But from the first paragraph I was drawn in and I'm so glad I read it. It's perfect. If you were the queen, I would totally willingly be your pet :P