Ooh...excellent second chapter. I loved the meeting between Claire and the boys. Easy dialogue and characterization...well done. I love how you've set up Claire's uneasiness with the boys. They'll have to work harder to gain her trust. OK...so is chapter three ready yet? :)
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Date: 2006-06-11 07:53 pm (UTC)